Presentation and feedback

I was so nervous preparing for my presentation, but I had written my first draft of my dissertation so I knew the information that I needed to tell people. Below is the brief structure of what I will be including of my dissertation for me to start of my presentation off with, before going into more detail on some of the subheadings that I will be covering such as overconsumption, The Industrial Revolution (looking at the impact of this) and the Make do and mend approach of the 2nd World War.

šIntroduction - where I will talk about what I will talk about in next few paragraphs and why, research methods,

šChapter 1 – own experience in Primark, discussing brands

šChapter 2 – Marketing, advertising, communication e.g. celebrity endorsement

šChapter 3 – why it is difficult for people to change, what can we do to try to prevent us sticking to this over consumption lifestyle, and analysis of results of typeformsurvey and questionnaires

šConclusion - what I would have done if I had more time and money - Appendix with pie graphs and evidence of primary research - Bibliography Harvard Refrenced

The main feedback that I gained form my presentation were in these next few bluet points;

- Need to put in the physiology of shopping - about why we do it? mental health or bored? technology impacts

- look at this blog website https://securionpay.com/blog/ecommerce-shopping-experience/ for research

- Change Sunday law to stop so much consuming - but we have online so would this even help?

- Need together someone unrelated to my dissertation to read it and see whether it makes sense. doing this really helped because some parts of my dissertation used words and grammar that did not make sense and needed revising, without doing this my grade would be lower.